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A Crush
Contributed by
Clarity_Rising
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Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 11:58:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Laughing...
A bittersweet sound corrupts my ears
Enhances my senses and disrupts my mind.
I hear it and sigh.
Wondering...
Combusting with Caution,
Confused yet relaxed.
My ears are attuned to the noise.
Stopping...
I open my eyes and look at you
Through fluttered lashes and sweaty hands
You open your mouth in question.
I Stop, Wonder, and Laugh.
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Clarity_Rising
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2004-12-27 23:58:47]
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Re: A Crush
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 12:38:02 AM AEST
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| Sweet write. :-) |
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Re: A Crush
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by Sapphire_Blue on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 04:56:04 AM AEST
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| Cool poem, liked this one alot, excellent choise of words, composed beautifully, keep on writting, you do it so well. |
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Re: A Crush
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 10:45:14 AM AEST
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| this was great i love the flow |
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Re: A Crush
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 12:29:29 AM AEST
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| and so my journey into your world has come to a halt, one that I do not wish to make. With this and the others read, I eagrly anticipate your next work of art. |
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Re: A Crush
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 10:06:09 PM AEST
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So beautiful.
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Re: A Crush
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by CuriousitysCat on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 10:08:37 PM AEST
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This poem really captured the likes of being in that little world you create around you and the person you are 'crushing' on. This was an unexpected surprise for me to read.
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~JaZz |
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Re: A Crush
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by NoSaint on
Monday, 15th January 2007 @ 02:46:19 PM AEST
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well written
Shari |
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Re: A Crush
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 06:05:51 PM AEST
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My dear friend you have captured the feeling of having a 'crush" so well. I remember feeling like this about a guy. My words would trip over my tongue and my hands were as sweaty as hell, lol. I hope things have advanced for you and aren't still in crush mode~ The best of wishes to you always my dear friend.
warm hugs n smiles,
sue m |
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