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Warmth for a Cold Soul
Contributed by
hoidy
on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 11:17:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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Up atop a mountain so proud
Stands an echo of a world long passed
A place where technology has not advanced
Nor human kindness gone from thought
The cozy browns welcome you in
From the sheets and blankets of snow
Your troubles are left at the door
For nothing but joy abides inside
The fire crackles and pops
As the cold wind is driven out of mind
Fresh cookies and cocoa are placed
Beside the unfinished puzzle
The tingling returns to your fingers and toes
As you thaw by the fire
Through the window the cold is seen
But refuge is taken inside
How does such a simple cabin
Bring warmth to a cold soul?
Is it the fire? The cabin?
Or something in the soul itself?
Copyright ©
hoidy
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2004-12-27 23:17:51]
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Re: Warmth for a Cold Soul
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 11:22:16 PM AEST
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Nice and descriptive. I know a place like that. :-)
Cheers! |
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Re: Warmth for a Cold Soul
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 11:23:56 PM AEST
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Great imagery.
Good job. |
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Re: Warmth for a Cold Soul
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by emystar on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 11:51:21 PM AEST
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Well I couldn't change one thing as it's a masterpeice. Again, something we all need to read. Luv your style 'cause when u write u say it like I like to, short, straite to the point with powerfull meaning behind your words.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy
May u always have warmth 4 your soul. |
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Re: Warmth for a Cold Soul
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by girish on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 12:21:48 AM AEST
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wish to find the warmth? read my poems and you can have the warmth in your-poetry.com itself.
girish |
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Re: Warmth for a Cold Soul
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 12:57:23 AM AEST
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| wow, i really love the way you've taken something so simple and something people take for granted, and turned it into such a great poem with meaning and depth. you've got great talent to be able to do that. i loved reading this! |
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Re: Warmth for a Cold Soul
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 02:41:55 AM AEST
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You have such a cool way of making such good imagery. Cool write.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: Warmth for a Cold Soul
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by Sapphire_Blue on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 05:04:05 AM AEST
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| Very descriptive, and painting a mysterious scence, very well done, This poem I enjoyed reading, thanx for sharing such masterful talent. |
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