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come fall with me
Contributed by
surge_joebot
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Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 10:58:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Take my hand, follow me down, down down down, to a place far away.
Take my life, brake me softly, so soft... soft like the touch of death.
Here we are falling, in and out, up and down, falling from reality.
Take this cross from my neck and the belief from my soul.
Away, away we go, away, away we fall.
Broken and heartless... longing and needy... away we fall.. away.
Leaving and breaking, waking and hoping on isolated dreams... away, we fall.
My life, this life, this falling and falling with you and me and forever in toe.
Take my hand... follow me to death. Down, down, down, you follow me to death.
Take my life... take yours too... down, down, down falling together in death.
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Re: come fall with me
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 01:15:42 AM AEST
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| this is a great poem and very dark and touching at the same time. i like it....sometimes we dont want to be alone, even in death. |
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Re: come fall with me
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by Sapphire_Blue on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 05:11:08 AM AEST
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| Interesting poem, visual and unique, cool to read, and thanx for sharing. |
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