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BLOOD ON PAPER
Contributed by
lemmen
on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 08:17:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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BLOOD is on my hand's.
BLOOD is on the paper.
BLOOD is what I'm using
to write with this day.
BLOOD is my DEATH.
DEATH is my BLOOD.
BLEEDING is my salvation.
DEATH is my prize.
As I look deep within myself.
I can find no other course
of action to take than to
just let my BLOOD run
Free.
Let it release me from my sin.
BLOOD on my hands.
BLOOD on the ground.
BLOOD on my cloths.
BLOOD is all around.
Here they come to save the
Day 911 is on the way
But when they arrive I shall
have died and taken
My sins away
7/5/2004
BY DENNIS LEMMEN
Copyright ©
lemmen
... [
2004-12-27 20:17:03]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: BLOOD ON PAPER
(User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 08:35:52 PM AEST
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| interesting poem. doesnt seem to have particular format at all. if read right, it could have kind of a psychotic tone to it. i liked the last stanza. |
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Re: BLOOD ON PAPER
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by slayer_015 on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 08:43:37 PM AEST
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Deep my friend,very deep indeed,yet very simplistic in its meaning.This is something I can relate to.Pain seethes through this poem.
Dark though very beautiful.
Brian |
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