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Contributed by
Naughtygurl
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Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 08:15:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I just want to cry,
and i will always ask myself
why things went wrong
how come i had to be the one,
i loved you, i trusted you , and now
now i dont even know you.
There was those times
you held me in your arms,
and told me I was the one
How come you had to lie,
I believed you to
Because i really did want it to be true.
With you I could be myself,
I could tell you everything in my heart
I would have givn you evrything i had...
I guess it doesnt matter now that your gone..
How did we go wrong,
i feel like i'm going to throw up.
I wish that we could just be together,
but life will never be like that.
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Naughtygurl
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2004-12-27 20:15:55]
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Re: How
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 08:37:36 PM AEST
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| sometimes what we wish for isnt the best thing for us. great write. |
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Re: How
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 11:19:21 AM AEST
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| I really loved the emotional outpouring within this piece. Very well done and the message was strong. Your talent is glowing brightly and I want to Thank You for sharing this wonderful talent of yours with the world and your fellow poets. I also want to Thank You for sharing a little of Yourself with all of us. Great Job. As I part, I have just a small request from All of us. Please keep your poetic ink pen flowing across sheets of paper as we await your next poetic caper. Your Reading Fan, MickeyPigKnuckles :) |
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Re: How
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by Sinned on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 01:18:10 PM AEST
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Aw---how sad
Keep writing
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Re: How
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by cooley1818 on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 12:27:25 PM AEST
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i dont understand how someone could only give u a 2 star rating on this poem, its so true, on the feeling that u go through in a break up of a loss, its painful, but u explained that feeling so perfect, i loved it
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Re: How
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by The_Unknown on
Wednesday, 9th May 2007 @ 04:38:42 PM AEST
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| This is sad... But it's still a great write. |
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