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I want to be
Contributed by
StrwBrryStrBrst0225
on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 07:12:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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.....It's sad really
when we lost everything we had...
theres not much left now,
and how would i have known.
....But nobodys lives through life,
without one mistake....
Was our love really that fake.
...and yes it's true we had our
memorys, but is thats all thats left for me?...
.... yes i guess this is my lil plea,
please let me see
that you and me were ment to be....
cuz i really want to be ,
the only one that your gonna see
Copyright ©
StrwBrryStrBrst0225
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2004-12-27 19:12:50] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I want to be
(User Rating: 1 ) by Spazzo on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 07:17:01 PM AEST (User
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Beautiful.
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Re: I want to be
(User Rating: 1 ) by slayer_015 on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 08:34:40 PM AEST (User
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Very emotional poem.
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Re: I want to be
(User Rating: 1 ) by poetrygirl1991 on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 10:24:51 PM AEST (User
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awesome...very emotional and a very sad poem, but u laid out your thoughts and u had ur own mind towards this poem which makes it unique, keep up on writing ~~poetrygirl1991 |
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