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Goodbye
Contributed by
O7NeVeS
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Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 05:33:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I was happy, so why did I look elsewhere
If I was in love, why did I seem not to care
Why was I always looking, for something better
When I could’ve sworn, we were meant to be together
How is it that I am making, your life so miserable
When there was once a time, we were so lovable
How could we go, from planning our future
To a point where our feelings, were no longer mutual
I said I wasn’t ready, was that the real reason
Or was it because, I was distracted by the season
Even though I love you, I am not in love
And I sometimes ask, the stars above…
How could one fall in, and out so quickly
Makes my stomach turn, I feel so sickly
You loved me, even when I was gone
But I on the other hand, treated you so wrong
I am truly very sorry, so I must apologize
And be true to myself, and no longer lie
Copyright ©
O7NeVeS
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2004-12-27 17:33:58]
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Re: Goodbye
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 05:48:53 PM AEST
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| Hey, this poem was very good, it reminded me of my relationship with this guy i used to date. Happy holidayz keep up on writing! |
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Re: Goodbye
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 05:49:14 PM AEST
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| Hey, this poem was very good, it reminded me of my relationship with this guy i used to date. Happy holidayz keep up on writing! |
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Re: Goodbye
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 07:18:09 PM AEST
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| I really liked this one. Good flow. Great write. |
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Re: Goodbye
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by breny on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 08:28:55 PM AEST
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i liked this poem alot. it makes you really think about the way you treat people. now i'm watching what I say to the people i love. Great poem! :-D
*Bren*
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Re: Goodbye
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 10:02:56 PM AEST
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This is a great write. It has a nice flow to it.
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Re: Goodbye
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by CurtisC on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 02:17:49 AM AEST
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sometimes things just don't work out, that's just the way it is...i really liked this poem too, just like all of the others, you are very talented tanya don't ever stop writing :)
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