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Hiding
Contributed by
Broken_Wingz
on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 01:40:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
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It's been a while since I wrote
the things I've felt inside.
I know it's because from myself
is where I've been trying to hide.
I don't want to feel the pain in me
or look for the lost little girl.
I want to curl up in a ball
and hide myself from the world.
I'm very afraid and more confused
about the way that I should feel,
And I know that if I hide myself
I will never have the chance to heal.
I've hid myself for far too long
and now the pain it haunts my dreams.
Hiding me from myself
is not at all what it seems.
Copyright ©
Broken_Wingz
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2004-12-27 13:40:10]
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Re: Hiding
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by smooshable on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 02:18:06 PM AEST
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| I can see the lost little girl in that poem. The pain and agony of life has become overwhelming and she's hiding. For me the best poetry are the ones that draw you into them, you feel like you are actually there, and for me, this one does. You've poored your heart out and its beautiful. Thank you for sharing it. |
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Re: Hiding
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by Gunda on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 02:31:58 PM AEST
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| Really good writen. And I just have to agree some day you have to stop hideing- and the sooner the better... |
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Re: Hiding
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by newewe on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 02:46:32 PM AEST
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| Self realization is good when the outcome is positive and taken that way. Expressed yourself very well. NIce write and continue that pursuit of enjoying when the moment arrives but do not let it be dictated. Do it when you choose not when others say you should...............doug |
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