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it didnt feel right when i held someone elses hand
Contributed by
prozac_memory
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Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 01:30:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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If I stitched on her smile
Would you come back to me
Or would I still be left here on my own
Watching you walk away with her in your arms
You know that when you said I ran away from you
I didn’t
I was walking slowly
And you didn’t even try to stop me
I now know I made a big mistake
And it does hurt
It hurts that you can find someone else
So much prettier than me
And when I held someone else’s hand
It didn’t feel right
If you go now
Just stay away
Keep away from my dreams
And leave me alone
Its for the best if I forget you
Cause I don’t wanna love you anymore
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Re: it didnt feel right when i held someone elses hand
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by Broken_Wingz on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 01:43:20 PM AEST
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You emit wonderful emotion into this poem. I know exactly what it is like to feel that way. Be strong, it will get better.
Great write,
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Re: it didnt feel right when i held someone elses hand
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by smooshable on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 02:39:20 PM AEST
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"If I stitched on her smile"
Don't know exactly why that cut me as much as it did but its very very powerful. I guess just thinking that your true love, could find someone else so easily.... yea, I know that hurts. Any poem that captures and can transfer pain to the reader as well as this is just incredible. You've tapped into a line of emotion that I think a lot of people will respond to. Great poem. |
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Re: it didnt feel right when i held someone elses hand
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 03:50:33 PM AEST
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| Powerful write. Awesome job! |
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Re: it didnt feel right when i held someone elses hand
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 07:04:51 AM AEST
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You have captured these feelings with both simplicity and finesse.
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