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Will You Dream Of Me?
Contributed by
pixie
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Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 11:57:05 AM in AEST
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Will you dream of me when I dream of you?
Will you make my heart turn red not blue?
At night I lay next to you awake,
Your heart is something I will never break.
In my dream we are floating way up above,
The rest of the world as we cherish our love,
There is no-one else around we are all alone,
In my dream world this place is all our own.
I wonder if I am floating around in your head,
As our two bodies lay side by side in bed,
As you stir you gently move in your sleep,
You look so beautiful I feel the need to weep.
My love runs so deep, more than I can explain,
Your loving arms are what have kept me sane,
I touch your face & I can’t help but smile,
With you is where I want to stay for awhile.
I drift back off with a smile on my face,
Here in my dream we have our own little space,
That no-one else can invade or come near,
Our true love is shown in ways so very clear.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-12-27 11:57:05]
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Re: Will You Dream Of Me?
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 12:06:19 PM AEST
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| nice. liked the rhyme scheme especially. |
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Re: Will You Dream Of Me?
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by Dan666 on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 12:19:31 PM AEST
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EXCELLENT
Dan666 |
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Re: Will You Dream Of Me?
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 12:26:18 PM AEST
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Lovely write Pixie.....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Will You Dream Of Me?
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by autumngreeneyes on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 01:04:22 PM AEST
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| I had to smile as I read this..so warm and fuzzy.. |
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Re: Will You Dream Of Me?
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 01:07:24 PM AEST
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Well Kriss what can i say that you dont already know, your one brilliant poet and you just cant stop amazing us everyday with your beautiful poems.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: Will You Dream Of Me?
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by prozac_memory on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 01:41:47 PM AEST
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i love this. =).
good write.
.x. |
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Re: Will You Dream Of Me?
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by TaintedSoul on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 02:03:08 PM AEST
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Another tenderly sweet write from you pixie. It's nice to see that there are some out there still touched by such deeply moving emotions that are light and not dark.
peace
TS |
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Re: Will You Dream Of Me?
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by OnAngelswings on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 02:25:02 PM AEST
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| so sweet and loving...I love this pixie...very nice write...Shari |
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Re: Will You Dream Of Me?
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by sweetangeluk on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 03:33:33 PM AEST
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Beautiful dreams Pixie beautiful words. Great flow loved this one
Love Sweetangelukxxxx |
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Re: Will You Dream Of Me?
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by katyqueen35 on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 03:45:30 PM AEST
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Beautiful words from a beautiful person.
great job pixe. |
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Re: Will You Dream Of Me?
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 08:01:37 PM AEST
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Are you coming on to me again?
Nice write, Pixie.
--Ghosty |
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Re: Will You Dream Of Me?
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by Kratur on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 11:55:32 AM AEST
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| I commend your writing range, as I myself am incapable of writing about love. |
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