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Here I Am
Contributed by
merry
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Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 10:33:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I know the feel of you
Too close for comfort
Wanting to rely on you
But not sure I can
Uncertainty makes me blink first
I cannot look you in the eye
So much clutter
I cannot break free
Here I am, here I am
I know the sound of you
Your step upon the stairs
As if treading on my heart
Trying to exert some love
Long gone if ever it was there
I don’t remember the way it felt
Here I am, here I am
You try so hard to please
Who are you trying for
I cannot tear down these walls
I’ve raised around my broken heart
Abandoned so long ago
Your callousness has lost you much
When I have no forgiveness left
Here I am, here I am
Copyright ©
merry
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2004-12-27 10:33:23]
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Re: Here I Am
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by pixie on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 12:32:07 PM AEST
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a very moving and well written emotional poem
pixie xx |
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Re: Here I Am
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by autumngreeneyes on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 01:41:00 PM AEST
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| I almost hear a rhyme..almost |
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Re: Here I Am
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by prozac_memory on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 01:43:41 PM AEST
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*tear*.
this is great.
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Re: Here I Am
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 08:35:31 PM AEST
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so sad, it breathes and is sooo excellent, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Here I Am
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by Sinned on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 01:00:08 PM AEST
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Oooooooo-strong emotionaly.You are good.
Sinned |
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Re: Here I Am
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by Stitch on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 03:41:16 PM AEST
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Having been in this place, I could not have said it better. Time has healed my wounds, and I am grateful to be with the one who tried so hard. I hope the best for you. Another stellar write.
Stitch |
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