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forge tabout us
Contributed by
jspencer1987
on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 02:14:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I've told you how i felt today and now there is nothing i can do,
because you know everything but i don't know anything about you,
just that i love the way you look and i love the way you move,
i love the was you smell and the way you fell, gentle and smooth,
sometimes i wish i could forget about you,
the way you make me feel and dream about you,
and that's all i do dream, dream of the day when me and you can be together,
and we can fly like a feather,
a feather in the wind dancing, freely moving in all direction,
But we won't be because the only effect I have on you is an affection.
A disease that won't go away. So maybe I will give you the vaccine so i can do what have wanted for so long and leave and never come back would you like that? No more of me? Would you care? Would you notice? You say that you would but some times i feel like don't want me around what kind of friend is that? You treat people you don't like better than me so what dose that make me scum just dirt on the bottom of your shoes that you can simply scrape off and forget about? In that case maybe you should just scrap me off and forget about me i am nothing but dirt to you anyways. So cast me aside and forget about me.... forget about us
Copyright ©
jspencer1987
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2004-12-27 02:14:58]
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Re: forge tabout us
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 02:22:09 AM AEST
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| Good poem. I look forward to reading more from you. |
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Re: forge tabout us
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by Stonedraider23 on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 02:26:53 AM AEST
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| ooooooo ahhhhhhhhhhhhh good write i hate bein scum but i dunno maybe i am im with ya bro |
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Re: forge tabout us
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 02:31:37 AM AEST
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Such a sad write, i couldnt get the flow. But overall i love this poem.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: forge tabout us
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by Mangs on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 03:30:15 PM AEST
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wonderful write...i can feel the pain....
Umang. |
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