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Black Roses
Contributed by
surge_joebot
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Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 10:31:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The black rose blackens.
The time for death rolls around.
Blood is on your door step.
Could hard steal.
Warm flesh and blood.
A wall once stained before.
A life once lived.
But no more.
The black rose wilted.
The fire died out.
The “I want yous” became,
“I need yous.”
Then no one was there,
And we fell...
And we fell...
And we fell.
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2004-12-26 22:31:30]
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Re: Black Roses
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by Luinil on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 10:58:26 PM AEST
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| awesome poem-- very original* |
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Re: Black Roses
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 02:56:53 AM AEST
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The “I want yous” became,
“I need yous.”
Great job. I really enjoyed this piece. |
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Re: Black Roses
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by TaintedSoul on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 02:30:40 PM AEST
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Everything dies, everything falls. Even love crumbles ... that is what speaks to me from the words you've penned. Enjoyed the write.
peace
TS |
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