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Mind Zombie
Contributed by
surge_joebot
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Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 10:30:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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How bad do you want this?
Would you kill for a moments silence?
Do you wake up screaming?
Is your pillow soaked in blood?
Are you sitting in the dirt...
Arms crossed over violated knees.
What is this emotional rape of unwilling minds!!!
Pluck out of innocence.
Blacken your soul with guilt.
Should you be happy?
Ever again...
You owe your everlasting mourning...
To a zombie on your mind.
Can you take it?
Just one bite...
Handle the bullet...
End your life?
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2004-12-26 22:30:10]
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Re: Mind Zombie
(User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 11:43:57 PM AEST
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wow, i really liked this,...a dark and brilliant write.
"Can you take it?
Just one bite...
Handle the bullet...
End your life?"
i Love that last stanza, good job |
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Re: Mind Zombie
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 02:03:06 AM AEST
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| wow this is really good well done |
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