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The Lonely Turtle
Contributed by
Mortis-Dark
on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 04:19:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I hope my words find you well.
I feel cast out like a turtle without a shell.
Im cracked and broken and flipped aside.
Hoping alone may I still survive.
One lonely turtle.
Looking for love in all the wrong places.
Just a turtle.
Afraid of new faces.
Maybe I should crawl back under my rock.
Never to poke my scaley head out again.
Maybe this is something that im not suppose to win.
A broken shell always follows a broken heart.
I blew the wind that extingushed the spark.
Copyright ©
Mortis-Dark
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2004-12-26 16:19:56]
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Re: The Lonely Turtle
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by autumngreeneyes on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 04:43:47 PM AEST
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| The only thing I would critique is that somewhere it lost the theme of the lonely turtle..which is a shame..I was falling in love with the little upside down struggling guy...and I wanted to give him a right-up.. |
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Re: The Lonely Turtle
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 10:47:02 PM AEST
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Great poem.
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Re: The Lonely Turtle
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by shelby on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 03:59:44 PM AEST
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awwww this is adorable yet a little sad nicely done though
hugs
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