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This Is Me
Contributed by
RealCrystal
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Sunday, 1st December 2002 @ 02:00:00 AM in AEST
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I will show you that my style is new
And my knowledge is true
And the words I speak are forever going to be used
Because I choose to be original
And my rhyming scheme is developed by the individual, me
I'm the auxilary for those try to find their way
And that's why my wisdom is always escalating, elevating
Always impeling haters, and wannabe's
For the wannabe's wanna be me but never go into the game deeply
And haters have nothing to do
Except try to find a breach in ehat I speak
But both know when I leave a room there's nothing but my words left in pliant minds
I'm the one and only, one of a kind
And you'll never see me standing in line for respect
If anything there's a line for mine
'Cause these are the words that rectify wrongs in just one rhyme
Speaking of rhymes why are yours so trute
Alll you see is the day, and I talk about the night
And when it's dark I'm the one who turns on the light
For the world to see
What the streets look like to me
And they look like anarchy
Where teens like me are hoodwinked into selling their souls for money, drugs, gangs, slavery of the mind and larceny
You could say that I 'm one of the lucky ones
That got out without one scratch from the destruction of guns
Yet the bullets of my past force my mind to go through past altercations
With nonavigation towards a solution
Creating expulsion of feelings
But my soul is tenacious
In other words persisten and holding
Waiting for the morning when I'm alone
And a figure in the light says it's time to come home
Copyright ©
RealCrystal
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2002-12-01 02:00:00]
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Re: This Is Me
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by OreO on
Sunday, 1st December 2002 @ 02:20:50 AM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful, i'm glad you
made it out alive and that your ok, that
can be a dangerous playground to be in
Thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed it
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: This Is Me
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by brucebatmanwayne on
Sunday, 1st December 2002 @ 03:10:04 AM AEST
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Interesting, but reminds me a lot of Eminem and rap... not quite sure if thats what you're going for.
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Re: This Is Me
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 1st December 2002 @ 06:59:51 PM AEST
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Lovely write....Welcome to YPDC..
Jenni |
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Re: This Is Me
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by RealCrystal on
Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 07:45:49 PM AEST
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I don't understand what you mean of it reminds you of Eminem and rap, I guess to different people it might portray a different image but that is just how I like to write. Whether it's rap poetry or whatever. How I wrote it just shows you a little piece of me, and how I am.
P.S. I beleive that my angle draws in the minds of people in a way that regular stanzas and rhymes can't. I encourage you to read my other poems and comment! |
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Re: This Is Me
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by Baby_Blu-XTC on
Friday, 13th December 2002 @ 05:30:23 PM AEST
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| This is very well written.U put alot of work into this it was well worth it.Grea job. |
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