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Time will tell
Contributed by
Gigi_15
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Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 09:31:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Sometimes this gets me so confused
Having no idea what to choose
Should I wait for you
Or should I just let you loose?
My heart wants to wait
But my head doesn't know if I should stay
Would you break my heart?
Would you tear me apart?
Would you even want me then?
Should I risk it?
Are you really worth it?
These are all answers I can't find
They keep running through my mind
You know I love you
You know I'm yearning for you
Please don't take too long
Because I'm not as strong to care on
You see the more I wait
The more my hope will fade
So come to me as soon as you can
For then I'll be your girl
And you'll be my man
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Gigi_15
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2004-12-26 09:31:46]
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Re: Time will tell
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by Gigi_15 on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 11:33:00 AM AEST
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| Hey guys pls post comments! I wanna know what you guys think about my poem thank you |
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Re: Time will tell
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by justinblue on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 03:05:22 PM AEST
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This is a good poem. I hate wondering if your makeing the right choices in a partner
I feel what your saying cause I have one to many girls end up waisting my time |
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Re: Time will tell
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 10:00:30 PM AEST
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Well penned. Confusion well expressed. Who knows what to do when walking down Love's path. Too many times the road splits up and there are no road signs. I hope you walked the right way.
Take care,
David |
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