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CAN U DIG IT?
Contributed by
emystar
on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 04:03:01 AM in AEST
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SultryRose's Signatures
Yes, She's alone with her
cats, t.v. computor, this-n-that.
She uses herb to kill her pain.
Neva goes away completely
jus enuff so she can
see thru it.
Her life of solitude
gives her time
to help others-n-pray
her lite shines.
Sometimes insomnia hits
rite tween her lines
48 hrs.time after time.
She reaches out
to others in pain,
down hearted from rain.
Her soul neva was
her own.
At such a little girl
'twas stripped away.
She forgot how to play.
She neva gave her body
"cause she wanted to.
Was only thing she's
programed to do.
A knight came-n-found
her lost soul,
taught her verbally
how to rock-n-roll.
Now she wants him
to know he found her soul.
Can u dig it?
luv u T.B.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2004-12-26 04:03:01]
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Re: CAN U DIG IT?
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by Loyalist on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 04:12:19 AM AEST
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Rattle on! I reread this 3 times and each time I liked it more.
"She reaches out
to others in pain,
down hearted from rain.
Her soul neva was
her own.
At such a little girl
'twas stripped away.
She forgot how to play.
She neva gave her body
"cause she wanted to.
Was only thing she's
programed to do."
The above is my favorite part. Thanks for reading my opinion. |
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Re: CAN U DIG IT?
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by autumngreeneyes on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 12:54:32 PM AEST
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never gave her body because she wanted to..
yes I can dig it....
excellent write |
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Re: CAN U DIG IT?
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 04:51:09 PM AEST
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Nice one grrlfriend....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: CAN U DIG IT?
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by SavingMarion on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 06:12:13 PM AEST
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| i can dig it |
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Re: CAN U DIG IT?
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 11:00:24 PM AEST
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Yeah, I dig it. Awesome write.
Spazzo |
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Re: CAN U DIG IT?
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by sweetangeluk on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 03:43:21 PM AEST
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Excellent wow great rattle.
Love Sweetangelukxxx |
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Re: CAN U DIG IT?
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 03:42:57 AM AEST
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Yup i dig it gf. a very cool write.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: CAN U DIG IT?
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by mina-1 on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 03:35:01 PM AEST
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yeah sweet girl i dig it.
i love your poetry keep it coming babe
luv,
sue |
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