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The Weak
Contributed by
Riot_Girl
on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 03:24:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I always wondered what was inside you,
inside that mind.
Lies, quilt, sorrow,
i shall find.
So pretty on the outside,
blue eyes that shine.
What pain will you now grind?
Have you ever looked in to me?
If you did, you can see
someone in desprate need ran threw me.
My mind and soul is shattered and cold;
a libary of events and stories
that havent been told.
Tears wanting to fall,
blood waiting to be shed,
their must be something you can recommend.
Stop hurting me day after day,
stop choosing the things you wish to say,
let me live my life,
and i will let you fullfil the crime.
The weak this time will survive.
Copyright ©
Riot_Girl
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2004-12-26 03:24:34]
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Re: The Weak
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by Loyalist on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 04:45:09 AM AEST
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| What a welcome bit of poesy from a new comer! You must have been wrting for a while at least!? Very nice write and verse. I really liked how this one opened up. Thanks for reading my opinion. |
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Re: The Weak
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by sweetangeluk on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 03:44:57 PM AEST
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Wonderful poem Riot
Love Sweetangelukxxx |
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Re: The Weak
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 02:30:39 AM AEST
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"The weak this time will survive."
Powerful line to end a poem with. Good write. |
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