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Love's Revival
Contributed by
ShadowsLuster
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Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 02:31:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I walked through the trenches of dirt,
Where I mellowed with the fellows of darkness.
Smiled for the people above my hearth,
Where they would walk on with their rifles of hurt.
Though in the midst of my darkened slum,
A pair of green eyes were watching me glum!
In my quick turn of delight
Went out those beautiful lights.
While I hung in dismay,
Came the horde of envoys.
They claimed that those eyes just may
Be the orbs of a fair goddess!
Lured by this obscure enigma,
I made my way to majestic Olympus.
Storms crossed and lands conquered,
All in my darkened trench of dirt.
Yet at the foot of the lofty alp,
Ended my trench of sorrow.
And in it's stead,
Laid a curious road to follow.
What a sight for me to see!
Face of an Angel...
White of snow.
Eyes of green,
Too pretty to know.
A curious nose,
Cute as can be!
And lips that of roses
For someday to kiss.
Her body was that of luscious curves,
A god like figure.
Now how could this be?
All this said to await me?
Dropped to my knees in awe,
I called but believed naw'.
Though she came,
None the less,
Down to her knees
For a hug and some rest.
Away we walked from that peak,
About love we should not speak.
Two shy hearts,
Amongst the rest.
Sooner or later,
Love to manifest.
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ShadowsLuster
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2004-12-26 02:31:32]
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Re: Love's Revival
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by autumngreeneyes on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 02:52:55 AM AEST
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Re: Love's Revival
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by ShadowsLuster on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 10:38:15 AM AEST
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If that's another way of saying its sucks please dont be so vaigue!! XD lol
So help me make it better and quick! I gotta give this poem along with a present to my love! ^_^ |
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Re: Love's Revival
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by ShadowsLuster on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 11:03:17 AM AEST
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Ok, I have made a few adjustments. Read this from the middle on and sorry, it's still a work in progress!! X_X
(*mark corrections)
What a sight for me to see!
Face of an Angel...
White of snow.
Eyes of green,
Too pretty to know.
A curious nose,
Cute as can be!
And roses of lips,*
For someday to kiss.
Her body was that of luscious curves,
Figure of a goddess.*
Now how could this be?
All this said,*
To await for me?*
Dropped to my knees in awe,
I called but beleived naw'.
Though she came,
None the less,
Down to her knees
For a hug and some rest.
Away we walked from that peak,
About love we should not speak.
Two shy hearts,
Among the rest.
Sooner or later,
Love to manifest. |
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