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Desecending Friendship
Contributed by
sick_n_twisted
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Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 12:57:40 AM in AEST
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You dont want to talk to me
Your too good for our friendship to be
Its your attitude you've exchanged
From good to bad you've arranged
You were such a good friend
I didnt want our friendship to desecend
Your gone to the city you moved
Its our friendship you havent proved
But I still love you
Even with all the horrible thing you do
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sick_n_twisted
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2004-12-26 00:57:40]
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Re: Desecending Friendship
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by hellsfallenangel on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 01:35:12 AM AEST
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hey nice write read mine ok
DEMON |
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Re: Desecending Friendship
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by smooshable on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 01:54:40 AM AEST
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| I really like this poem! Your friend has moved away and moved on from you and your life and you write about it like he died. I know when you lose a friend in this way its just about as bad as if they'd actually died. They are dead to you. Its a really good analogy for the situation, wish I'd thought of it! (I hope you did it intentionally hehehehe) |
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Re: Desecending Friendship
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 12:49:59 AM AEST
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Nice poem. You express your feelings well. I've felt that way before with friends that have moved away too.
Thanks for your comment :-) |
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Re: Desecending Friendship
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by sick_n_twisted on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 04:51:29 PM AEST
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| THANX for your guys comment i really appreicate it! that peope actaully read my poetry c ya! |
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