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loNely ToniGht
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
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Saturday, 25th December 2004 @ 11:13:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Im feeling so lonely tonight, lying hopeless in my cold bed
my thoughts lead back to you, my hurt continues to be fed
I lie here all by myself, while tonight you are not alone
you hold her tightly now and your love for her has grown
you have everything, the girl and still your heart
you dont give a damn about me, shot by your careless dart
i know you've done this before, other girls have been victim to your sting
falsely charming them with your smile, i guess i was just another fling
i shouldnt value you so much, but who can stop their heart to feel?
something they cant control, a warm love that seems so real
why didnt you have the courage to at least tell me we were thru?
wheres the decency? it isnt right what you do
i dont want to think of you two, please just kill me now
you take off her clothes and caress her whole body, the thought it is so foul
tortured by the images, i hope your happy with everything you got
im sad but who cares, think of me you'd rather not
im lonely again tonight, lying hopeless in my cold bed
my thoughts lead back to you, my hurt cannot be said
tears roll down my lifeless cheeks, angry tears of sorrow
i dont want to live another day, not even for tomorrow
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2004-12-25 23:13:11]
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Re: loNely ToniGht
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 12:16:08 AM AEST
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| This is amazing. I can totally relate to it...I could see myself in this poem lol. Thank you so much for sharing it. It really is great! :-) |
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Re: loNely ToniGht
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by Mangs on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 08:31:05 AM AEST
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this is a very sad and amazing write dear....i feel the same....read my other poems...maybe it would make you feel better...need to get out of this....im trying...so should you...
Love,
Umang. |
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Re: loNely ToniGht
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 10:35:17 PM AEST
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| this totally relates to how i feel this very moment! your peom is amazing cheer up...im sure theres someone better out there waiting for you this very second |
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Re: loNely ToniGht
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by Man_On_High on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 10:25:04 PM AEST
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what a sad Christams gift to them all (at YPDC)..
your saddness and grief are written so profoundly Rach..without pulling any punches..
I really respect that..What a painfully awesome read..
B
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