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one wish
Contributed by
sek-c-shaun
on
Saturday, 25th December 2004 @ 10:55:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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if i had one wish
just one demand
i would wish to be with you
we could walk barefoot in the sand
there is no moon
and the stars are bright
i dont need stars for you are my light
we walk along the shore
the cold water prushes against our feet
your head on my chest
listening to my heart beat
as we stop
i look into your eyes
and now i know
my feelings are not lies
we lay in the sand
our fingers latched together
i know i will love you
for always and for ever
all the tears i shed all the memories i missed
i still remember the first time we kissed
its a memory thats unforgetable
its a memory that was inevitable
and now when i hold you
i know you are mine
i know that our love
is an eternal kind
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sek-c-shaun
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2004-12-25 22:55:08]
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Re: one wish
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 12:21:26 AM AEST
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| Very heartful. I can sense the emotion pouring out of every line. The flow's awesome too! Nice work. |
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Re: one wish
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 12:59:04 AM AEST
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How sweet is this; its such a beautiful heart warming poem. Thanks for posting.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: one wish
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 01:58:36 AM AEST
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just awesome!
"all the tears i shed all the memories i missed
i still remember the first time we kissed
its a memory thats unforgetable
its a memory that was inevitable" i can relate to that!! thanku |
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