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Glass Splinters
Contributed by
brucebatmanwayne
on
Saturday, 30th November 2002 @ 11:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Thoughts like shards
of glass
first reaction, let go
internal pain imagined
a product of above
the wonderful mind
the self-inflicted wound
licks them clean
and starts again
Copyright ©
brucebatmanwayne
... [
2002-11-30 23:40:00]
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Re: Glass Splinters
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by OreO on
Sunday, 1st December 2002 @ 01:59:18 AM AEST
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This is a very deep write, and it's true sitting around and stewing on things in your mind will only cause internal pain so deep. Its almost as though one could say it was self mutilation without the physicallness of it all. Thanks for sharing this one it has great depth and a deepness that's unexplainable.
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Glass Splinters
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by RealCrystal on
Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 08:30:29 PM AEST
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| I like this, tell me if I'm wrong when I say that it shows what happens when you think about something, and I think it's also a result of when you hold on to something painful that happened to you, only to hurt you more on the inside |
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Re: Glass Splinters
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by kels497 on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 04:00:46 PM AEST
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i really like this one-its deep and i can relate to it because i think everybody's just thought about something too much...
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