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Wishing UPon that Invisible Star
Contributed by
chrissypooh
on
Saturday, 30th November 2002 @ 11:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I wish that one day
you'd come back to me.
And together we'd be
living together happily.
I wish you'd never left me
on this Earth
with out your love and comfort.
I wish you'd come
back to me
But I guess
I'm wishing on that Invisible star
I wish that one day
you'd come back to me
and together we'd be
living forever happily
But I guess I'm wishing on that invisible star
Copyright ©
chrissypooh
... [
2002-11-30 23:00:00]
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Re: Wishing UPon that Invisible Star
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Sunday, 1st December 2002 @ 02:05:15 AM AEST
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I've always been one to say wishes never come true, that only dreams come true, this poem kind of backed that up for me, but that's just how i feel. Thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed it alot. Beautif.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
ul write.
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Re: Wishing UPon that Invisible Star
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 01:36:56 PM AEST
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| In November of last year I lost a great friend.
Your poem resembles how I feel and what I wish could happen. Thank you for writing this it means so much to me to know that someone else feels the way I feel for losing someone so dear and loved. |
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