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the answer
Contributed by
polishkiss
on
Saturday, 25th December 2004 @ 10:39:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Sick of pretending
Sick of hiding the truth
Full of doubt
Easy to break
Shall I end it all?
Shall this be my answer?
To the question long forgotten
Been in the darkness to long
Forgot the sight of light’
All I feel is pain
Take me away
End it all
Burning up from crying on the inside
Can’t show anyone my pain
Gotta be perfect
Trapped in a box
The lock long rusted
There’s no escape
Tired of crying, pretending
Shall I end it all?
One twist of the knife
Deep in my veins
Handful of pills, make me forget
Closer to the end
Just take it away
Make it end
Should this be my answer?
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2004-12-25 10:39:35]
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Re: the answer
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by Rhymingron on
Saturday, 25th December 2004 @ 11:24:45 AM AEST
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| This a well written poem, although I have a hard time with the subject. Suicide is an out, but not the answer. |
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Re: the answer
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by clowns_can_burn on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 01:20:22 AM AEST
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i hate hiding in that box, i dont know the answer, but i am agreeing that its just a way out...not a answer
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Re: the answer
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by hellsfallenangel on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 01:47:09 AM AEST
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nice write i know how u feel read some of mine
DEMON |
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