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i miss you
Contributed by
socialmisfit
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Saturday, 25th December 2004 @ 02:02:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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silent tears
stream down my face
to see my angel
falling from grace
crimson tide
sinfull fears
lovley angel
whom i held so dear
i tryed so hard
to stay in sanitys yard
never did my love ever fail
not even when you took me straight to hell
what did i do?
what could i say?
was i not good enough?
why coulden't i stay?
what dose it take to get a hug
me the child, you the mother
why did you leave me
and go have another?
i cry this night
in remembrance of you
when you walked away
my happiness went with you
merry christmas mom.....werever you are
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2004-12-25 02:02:28]
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Re: i miss you
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by emystar on
Saturday, 25th December 2004 @ 02:26:35 AM AEST
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So sad but written well.
I could never imagene what this would be like but I'm so sorry and she may come back and find u.
No matter what it wasn't anything u did 'cause u was jus an innocent child.
May your wish come true.
luv, huggs, faith, hope, joy, peace,
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Re: i miss you
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by Loyalist on
Saturday, 25th December 2004 @ 03:24:28 AM AEST
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| Powerful! When a poem you read brings a tear, you know it is good. Thanks for sharing your feelings in verse. Thanks for reading my opinion. |
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