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Ramble Ease
Contributed by
girltranscended
on
Saturday, 25th December 2004 @ 12:50:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Quit a job I couldn’t stand
still with my old man
of war and peace
of mind controls your hand
shake the ground where I am a
maze of roads to take
out what you determine
nation of stress
full change is coming
through the heart of gold
coast downhill.
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2004-12-25 00:50:14]
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Re: Ramble Ease
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by emystar on
Saturday, 25th December 2004 @ 01:29:08 AM AEST
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Very thought provoking, creative, strong write.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Ramble Ease
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by Stonedraider23 on
Saturday, 25th December 2004 @ 02:19:39 AM AEST
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| good write i got lost on the roads and was goin to fast downhill |
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Re: Ramble Ease
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 06:35:52 AM AEST
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There seems to be quite a mixture of deeds and emotions mixed into this compact piece.
You have a way of saying alot with a little...I admire that! |
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Re: Ramble Ease
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 02:57:00 AM AEST
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wonderful:) hugs n' love nessa
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