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Love Me (2103)
Contributed by
ShadowsLuster
on
Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 09:42:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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My heart is racing but pacing,
It wants to seek love.
Not just any simple tie,
But one with passion and flames,
A love that is felt both ways.
The fire that lays dormant in my chained up heart,
Is roaring through the seams if the door.
Emerging,
Slowly but surly.
It wants to break through the chain,
And burst forth through the door.
I want to steal your heart,
So we can feel it both ways.
I want to seize your eyez,
And make you hypnotized.
I want to seek your love,
And you to seek mine.
Say that you'll love me,
Care for me,
Be there for me.
And I you.
Take me into your arms,
And you can be tucked in mine.
Be with me under the stars,
And I'll be with you forever...
I want to run off with your heart,
But most of all,
I want to run off with you
Please say "And I you"
Dont give me it all,
Just hold me when I fall.
All I need is your love,
Say that you need mine.
Just Love Me
Copyright ©
ShadowsLuster
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2004-12-24 21:42:45]
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Re: Love Me (2103)
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by emystar on
Saturday, 25th December 2004 @ 01:41:44 AM AEST
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Wwoo, this is a masterpeice anytime and any where.
that would be the perfect luv we all long for from time to time.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Love Me (2103)
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 09:49:55 PM AEST
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Nicely done. A little rough around the edges in its expression, but keep writing. You can do well.
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