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Daily Awakening (122404)
Contributed by
ShadowsLuster
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Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 09:30:10 PM in AEST
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Awoken by the shouts of the eternal angry,
Yet I lay undisturbed still...
The remote flashes red,
Comforting music fills the room.
The Angry is still yelling
Yet I lay undisturbed still...
My eyes open softly,
As the strum of guitar and soft beats slip through the air.
Yellow filth I rub away,
And red cascades around the black voids.
Doors are slammed by the angry
Yet I lay undisturbed still...
I stand in the midst of a cold room
In only the thinnest of boxer shorts.
Throw on jeans
Search for a shirt
Curse the voices outside my door.
The angry is still yelling
Yet I stand undisturbed still...
A debate to leave my sanctum
Shall I open that door?
Thoughts erased on contact >
Pounds of footsteps grow near...
The angry is coming
Yet I stand undisturbed still.
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ShadowsLuster
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2004-12-24 21:30:10]
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Re: Daily Awakening (122404)
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by EternalNight4x on
Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 09:34:28 PM AEST
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| excellent write, i loved the repeating last line. keep it up |
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Re: Daily Awakening (122404)
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by ShadowsLuster on
Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 09:44:49 PM AEST
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| that was fast, I just posted it =). And thanx. I'm really glad you like it. |
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Re: Daily Awakening (122404)
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 11:10:01 PM AEST
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| very good, well done!!!! |
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Re: Daily Awakening (122404)
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by Gothchyk on
Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 11:18:04 PM AEST
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| Awesome write, can't wait to read more of your stuff. |
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Re: Daily Awakening (122404)
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by emystar on
Saturday, 25th December 2004 @ 01:54:29 AM AEST
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In your patience posess ye your soul.
U have a mighty strong soul.
A masterpeice that we all can learn from.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Daily Awakening (122404)
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 25th December 2004 @ 04:47:29 PM AEST
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Oh hunni...
*hugs you tons*
*doesn't have the words*
I wish there was something I could say, something I could do to make it all better, but I know there isn't.
So, I'll just say that if you need someone to listen, I'm here.
(And I understand)
Great poem hunni, though it tuged at my heartstrings.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Daily Awakening (122404)
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 25th December 2004 @ 04:57:39 PM AEST
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(Feels like a idiot for thinking you were shadowdaughter) Sorry.
Great write!
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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