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Darkness
Contributed by
Mesano
on
Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 04:19:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The darkness rests inside us all,
Always knowing what we regret,
Yet it waits to catch us when we fall,
Knowing the things we wont forget.
* * *
It ruins our lives,
But mends our souls,
Unsheaths our knives,
Our minds controled.
Healing the wounds,
Ending the pain,
But darkness consumes,
What we hold in vain.
Causing confusion,
Creating strife,
Swift and sudden,
Stealing your life.
* * *
Shadows dwelling in the light,
Hungrily watching... waiting to feed,
Emerging when it senses the night,
Steadily, stealthily, performing the deed.
Copyright ©
Mesano
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2004-12-24 16:19:17]
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Re: Darkness
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by Stonedraider23 on
Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 04:39:23 PM AEST
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| good write but ic y i like the dark |
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Re: Darkness
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by blacksabbath026 on
Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 08:43:26 PM AEST
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| very good poem,i agree with it lol |
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Re: Darkness
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by autumngreeneyes on
Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 09:03:25 PM AEST
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| It doesn't have to wait long for some of us |
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Re: Darkness
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by Dawny on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 12:54:29 PM AEST
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Very chilling and dark, excellent use of imagery, well done
Love Dawny xxx |
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