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White Noise
Contributed by
outsider
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Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 02:58:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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Surrounded by noise
Bombarded by static
Emotions are swirling
Frantic erratic.
Think i'm drowning
In a sea of maddening sound
Someone throw me a lifeline
Drag me to some silent ground.
Ceaseless invasion
Constant assault
One million phones ring
I pray for a halt.
One minute of silence
Is all that I need
To be away from the noise
Before my ears bleed.
Count down the hours
This job is my sorrow
Six hours of peace
I do it all again tomorrow.
Copyright ©
outsider
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2004-12-24 02:58:42]
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Re: White Noise
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 06:50:00 AM AEST
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| i really liked this..i think i know what youre trying to get across. good write |
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Re: White Noise
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 01:12:52 AM AEST
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Great flow!
I really liked this write. |
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Re: White Noise
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by freckle on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 08:17:13 PM AEST
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| Oh yeah! I've had those days! Good poem, I liked it. |
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Re: White Noise
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by Lovingangel4u on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 04:30:16 AM AEST
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Very vivid write of what you are experiancing. I like the write its very good, but it troubles me that you feel such terrible feelings and yet you continue to keep that job.
ILU
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Re: White Noise
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 05:51:31 AM AEST
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Wow that was such a nice write, i liked the wya you wrote it. Cool poem.
Jane x |
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