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December goodbye
Contributed by
emocutie07
on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 09:10:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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In front of you I stood, blocking away the bitter wind
Your icy breath danced upon my lips, and chilled my every bone
Anticipating the warmth of your hands, around my waist,
my eyes lock with yours as I lean embracing, your body with mine
Pushing away, you muttered some meaningless words and a heartless kiss goodbye..
The taste of your acerbic wine lingers on my tongue,
Maybe I was just your cheap thrill...something to pass the time?
Did I make you feel real..maybe not soo empty inside?
or did I not numb the pain..quite as well as I used to...shelter your tears, and bandage your wounds?
So now im sitting beneathe a streetlight, wishing on every single star I see tonight
I wonder what i could have said, what I did, or didnt do...
A few tears sting my cheeks, as I try to erase all thoughts of you
Oh, darling Please don't say those words
Please.... dont make me cry
Please dont leave me wanting you on this cold winters night
...yeah well these words came a little to late,
and now Im left to walk alone....
A blanket of snow upon my newly shattered heart
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2004-12-23 21:10:03]
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Re: December goodbye
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 09:25:41 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. with a powerful ending. i liked how this didnt really rhyme at all. |
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Re: December goodbye
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by autumngreeneyes on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 09:29:58 PM AEST
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| awww.. this is sucky LOL..good write though.. |
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Re: December goodbye
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by TheEarlyNovember on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 11:31:16 PM AEST
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| This is a sweet write. I bet we listen to the same music. |
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Re: December goodbye
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 12:45:07 AM AEST
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I thought this was great, and I'm all smiles this time lol and watch this one be the one that's about me...*sighs* lol I love you
Mason |
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Re: December goodbye
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 08:07:26 PM AEST
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| Awesome write. Great imagery. |
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