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Two-Thirty-Eight
Contributed by
alecfernadez
on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 04:59:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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It all started with a simple innocent kiss,
And from that moment I was far from lost,
Deep into the depths of her mind, the one I love
Far from the warm safe realm of sanity,
I dig deeper into this tangled web of thought;
won’t last forever
Flesh against flesh, mind against mind, soul against soul,
Stories within that have never been told,
We join as one creature for that moment in time,
Blinded in darkness, reborn in true light,
This verse of love in a magnitude beyond all;
Cannot last forever
The end is coming, yet were are still intertwined,
Never letting go, from this pure, warm, bliss,
Our lips still alive and our hands stuck together,
Our pure essence now stronger than ever,
We know that any second the end will come near;
This second will last forever
The wreckage of Flight two-thirty-eight lay ablaze,
Bodies lie; still burning from kerosene,
Fire engines struggle to put out the fire,
As the remains of the lost souls smoulder,
They notice two bodies holding each other dear;
Their burnt black lips still interlocked;
Their minds still connected;
Their souls fly high;
Now part of the sky…
Copyright ©
alecfernadez
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2004-12-23 16:59:43]
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Re: Two-Thirty-Eight
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 05:10:44 PM AEST
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| powerful poem. a very nice introduction to it as well. something that shakespeare did a few times to catch interest. your last stanza was amazing. written well. |
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Re: Two-Thirty-Eight
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 05:15:23 PM AEST
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this is prime Alec F poetry. Beautiful story turned surreal...you do this very well my friend.
Glad to see you back
Barkeep!
Larry |
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Re: Two-Thirty-Eight
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 05:17:43 PM AEST
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| Nice job...very powerful write. |
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