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Precious Rose
Contributed by
EternalNight4x
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Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 04:44:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I am you’re precious rose
You’re pride and joy
The girl that you had choose
Yet you used me like a toy
You said that nothing could ever
Mean more then I do to you
You thought that you were clever
With the words you spoke untrue
You called me you’re treasure
And I’m the reason that you live
Yet you’re sincerity I am unsure
I have nothing left to give
“You are my precious rose”
I believed what you had said
Yet don’t you know
All roses end up dead
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EternalNight4x
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2004-12-23 16:44:55]
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Re: Precious Rose
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 04:51:07 PM AEST
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| Wow...I love this one. The last stanza was especially powerful. I've felt this way before, so I know how you feel. Anyway, this is a wonderful poem and thank you for sharing it. :-) |
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Re: Precious Rose
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by bebe20071 on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 08:20:47 PM AEST
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This is beatiful. I love the last sentence. I can relate.
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Re: Precious Rose
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by Pyrofungus on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 08:26:34 PM AEST
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wow...i really felt every inch of what you said in this poem for i went through something similar...you might like my poem "is'nt it wonderful"
please comment on my work too
summer |
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Re: Precious Rose
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 01:17:51 PM AEST
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| Your poem is totally true, most guys use me like a toy just as u stated in your poem! Keep up on writing! |
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