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Mirror Mirror on the wall
Contributed by
bhav
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Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 02:58:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Mirror Mirror on the wall tell me who is the lonelist of us all?
dear Bhav you look lonely among all,
whenever I see you whether its summer ,winter of fall.
Mirror Mirror on the wall will things change this fall?
You never know Bhav if your beloved comes,
things might change this fall.
Mirror Mirror on the wall how do you know I am waiting for my beloved of them all,
i see you everyday ,your eyes tell it all.
Copyright ©
bhav
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2004-12-23 14:58:41] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Mirror Mirror on the wall
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 04:59:22 PM AEST (User
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very good write. the use of all and fall might be considered over used or might be considered as diction to make this poem unique. very captivating poem. keep up the excellent writes. |
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Re: Mirror Mirror on the wall
(User Rating: 1 ) by bhav on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 12:50:06 PM AEST (User
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Essentially9...
Thanks for reading and liking my poem....Bhav |
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