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I am lost
Contributed by
bhav
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Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 02:57:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I seem to loiter around without a aim,
i have lost myself…without you I am not the same.
There is just about nothing I look forward to,
without you even one plus one does not seem to be two.
I have lost …..lost myself,
i search for myself everywhere in people,places and things…still I don’t find myself.
Something seems to be missing,what’s missing?
i can’t answer that,
i don’t want to answer that.
For me you are the question and the answer itself,
let me be lost ,let me not find myself….isn’t it a bless in itself.
Copyright ©
bhav
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2004-12-23 14:57:21]
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Re: I am lost
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 05:14:15 PM AEST
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| there were some grammar errors, but other than that this was an excellent write. i liked the tone of this, and how it seemed like you were talking to yourself in it. you cant lose what you never found, and some people try to chain themselves, so they cant lose a part of them. a blessing in disguise that not many see. good write. |
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Re: I am lost
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by bhav on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 12:51:13 PM AEST
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Essentially9...
Thanks for reading and liking my poem....Bhav |
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Re: I am lost
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by Gracen2260 on
Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 08:27:02 PM AEST
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| An outstanding job |
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