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The Lost Ones
Contributed by
MysticDreams
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Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 01:49:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Doves may soar nigh the heavens,
Amoungst a celestial Sol.
Fish of angels glide in sapphire oceans,
Swim in diamond springs.
Ah, we, plastered in between,
Pasted to a stricken earth,
Nailed hand and foot,
Bound by rusted shackles,
Gagged by candied words,
Held without a word of protest.
Choking on soil and dust,
Crawling through a lifeless plain,
Suffocating in discontent.
Parched throats rasp in despiration.
Only now unheard.
To watch the eagle glide away,
Raising a wrinkled hand to its call.
A doleful tune; a sad farewell,
To the lost ones.
Copyright ©
MysticDreams
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2004-12-23 13:49:24]
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Re: The Lost Ones
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 05:16:07 PM AEST
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| interesting progression. interesting poem. written well with nice imagery. |
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Re: The Lost Ones
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by NoSaint on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 02:45:50 PM AEST
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such sadness i sense here ... well written
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