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The Vaccine Wagon
Contributed by
Crimson_Rose
on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 01:46:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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It was from her nightmares
She hated shots,
That light sting of pain,
Spreading through her arm like a virus
The Vaccine Wagon,
It’s wooden walls clanking over,
That dusty, dirt road
A scared little girl hid among the shadowing trees
Sharp, silver needles were plastered along the wagons wall
Glowing bottles of poison vaccinations,
Were scattered among the rickety floor
Shards of pointy glass poured out from the wagon
He had no name,
The man with the hideous syringe
A sickening grin was displayed across his face
Those eyes of that little girl grew large
The man ran from the wagon,
His long, scarred legs chasing after the scared child
He finally caught up to the terror-stricken girl
A psychotic laugh echoed through the trees
A silver point jabbed into her thin flesh,
As the black poison swelled through her veins
The thick needle ripped at her skin,
Exposing the very bone of her existence
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2004-12-23 13:46:43]
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Re: The Vaccine Wagon
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by MysticDreams on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 01:52:01 PM AEST
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| Nice! The metaphor of the wagon compared to your fear is really good. |
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Re: The Vaccine Wagon
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by LevyMetal on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 03:59:50 PM AEST
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| Hey, i like it. great job with discription and details. |
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Re: The Vaccine Wagon
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 05:17:54 PM AEST
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| powerful poem and superb ending. written with excellence. captivating. |
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