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Lies
Contributed by
JamieLeAnne
on
Saturday, 30th November 2002 @ 06:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Whretched souls,
cry,
demons tell truth,
compared to your lies,
my own idiocy is,
horrible enough,
without you proffessing,
your undying love,
The tears fall,
and I once fairest of all,
have been drained of my spirit,
and what is left of me is her,
I have been broken,
now not a lover,
only her servant,
though I was once your queen,
Whretched souls,
cry,
demons praise christ,
compared to your lies.
Nov.16,2001
Copyright ©
JamieLeAnne
... [
2002-11-30 18:00:00]
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Re: Lies
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Saturday, 30th November 2002 @ 07:14:13 PM AEST
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Well this is different
I enjoyed it alot. I don't
really understand alot of
it though, i guess i don't
understand Lies ..Thanks
for sharing this one
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Lies
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by AngryBunny on
Saturday, 30th November 2002 @ 10:21:27 PM AEST
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| I liked reading this. A little confusing, but hey, your writing, your emotions. I love the bitterness and anger portrayed. Good job!! |
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Re: Lies
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by plous on
Sunday, 1st December 2002 @ 12:21:21 AM AEST
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| You didn't kill this person did you, poem placed well. |
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