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Never Regrets
Contributed by
Red_October
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Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 11:05:55 AM in AEST
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Big inside me
and the feeling I get
leaves breathless good-bye and never regrets
each kiss
or held on to love at it's most tumultuous
moment, but not to describe
only to sink in and embrace the vibes...
You & I
so comfortable wrapped up
with nothing between -
only the sheets and us
I feel like I am so in love...
A visit I have long awaited
flies by
in the blink of our eyes
I promise I won't cry
anymore
but I already miss you as we walk out the door...
Bigger as you drive away
I get small
and my piece of the world
feels like nothing at all
with you gone...
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Red_October
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2004-12-23 11:05:55]
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Re: Never Regrets
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by pixie on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 11:10:02 AM AEST
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awww very emotional and sad,
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Re: Never Regrets
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 11:33:24 AM AEST
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Wow. You have outdone yourself with the vivid expression of feeling in this one.
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Re: Never Regrets
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by Nardo on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 12:46:51 PM AEST
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Sometimes I feel as your writing I'm in the moment of what your feeling.
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Re: Never Regrets
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 09:24:23 AM AEST
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wow!!
Well conveyed feelings of loss...or shall I say lack of togetherness.
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