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Killing my soul
Contributed by
lil_angel
on
Thursday, 11th July 2002 @ 11:00:10 AM in AEST
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I can see the inner struggle that you are going through
I want to touch you but you flinch away
It pains me to see you like this
You want to be happy but I don’t know how to make you that anymore
I want to be there for you
I can handle it I know I can
Let me be there for you
Please I love you so much
You were there for me when I needed you
Let me be there for you
I look deep into your eyes the inner struggle is getting harder for you to fight
You are losing
Let me help you
I can handle it, trust me school is out I am not stressed
Stop worrying about me and let me help you
I reach out to touch you but you only respond in anger
I love you
But I am at a lost on how to show you it
I ask you to open up to me
Finally you begin to
You tell me that you want to die
That there is nothing for you to live for anymore
I look deep into your eyes and I see the pain
I try to tell you that you have much to live for
But you only want her that’s the only thing that will make you happy
I want to make you happy
I love you so much but that doesn’t seem to matter to you
You are hurting but I am not ready to say good-bye
Please hang in there I know you can make it
You mean the world to me and I would be lost without you
This is my plea
My plea I make on my knees
Please let me be there for you
This is killing my soul
I know you need help
I can’t bear to lose you like this
There are reasons to live
Love will find away if it is meant to be
These may not be the words that you wanna hear
But it’s all I got
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lil_angel
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2002-07-11 11:00:10]
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Re: Killing my soul
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by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 08:26:54 PM AEST
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very sad but yet a great write, I hope your brother is out of this depression.It is a very frustrating feeling when you see someone in pain and you want to help but the help is not accepted.Just be there for him and love him.the fog will lift.
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Re: Killing my soul
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by Fiona on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 05:38:35 PM AEST
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| This is a very touching poem, and I hope you and your brother all the best...It is really hard to deal with these things...I know from experience. I hope your brother is getting help, because I'm sure he's probably a very special person with lots of potential. God Bless. Luv, *Fee* |
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Re: Killing my soul
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by poetrygodslove on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 09:35:10 AM AEST
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| this made me cry. I to have brothers and I wouldnt want something to happen to them . You can tell in this poem as well that the one that is sad and wants to end ones life makes the family members just as sad. good write my friend. |
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