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Fake
Contributed by
in2thetwilightzone2
on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 03:45:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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i feel so useless,
i feel so out of time,
i feel like i cant say a word,
without getting the wrong line,
beautiful child,
tearful and pained,
you left your heart on your sleeve,
now nothing was gained,
there is no love,
no rest for us,
isolated in this sadistic world,
were do we go?
who do we turn to?
who do we know?
who will help us through?
stare up into the sky
remember if your willing to change,
there isnt anything wrong with you
everytime i feel,
a half hearted embrace,
i feel my tears,
ride down my face,
ive lost the will,
to learn from the pain,
i just take the blow,
again and again,
ive found the ashes,
scattered and fine,
a warning from the lord,
i am walking the line,
i found the rustling,
behind two eyes,
was a message,
i was walking on ice,
im so lost,
bewildered and alone,
looking for direction,
can i find it on my own?
every time i sleep,
my eyes still dart,
each time i try to rest,
it pulls me apart,
everytime i open up,
i open my whole heart,
il be soon a wanderer again,
falling back down to the start
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2004-12-23 03:45:34]
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Re: Fake
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by blueeyedevil13 on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 03:53:21 AM AEST
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wow, that is amazing it reminds me of every friend ive ever had for the past 4 years. excellent keep it up.
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Re: Fake
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by bluebird on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 03:59:29 AM AEST
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this is awesome writing.you really captured what alot of ppl feel. thanks
~keep the faith~
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Re: Fake
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by Katie2008 on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 12:49:20 PM AEST
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| This was really well written. I hope it helped you. I hope your friends get a chance to read this, too. |
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