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In The Dead Of Winter
Contributed by
deadreckoning1983
on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 02:48:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I stand beneath these canvased nights,
Listening to the wind cut thru the branches.
Bringing an eery welcome into the dark.
A cigarette lantern lights the eyes,
Revealing the soul of it all.
A reminisce about love, politics, or life,
Thoughtfully, peacefully mulling it over.
A bright crescent dances thru limbs,
Nimbly finding it's way across the tangled arms and fingers.
Waiting for the ensemble that accompanies this play,
Back ally cat fights, or barks echoed down the streets.
Life is good now, life is simple in this moment.
There doesn't have to be emotion or care or listening.
Just restful thinking thoughts,
Wrapped warm beneath the flesh.
Thinking to myself life is good now,
And they can never take this away from me.
Copyright ©
deadreckoning1983
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2004-12-23 02:48:57]
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Re: In The Dead Of Winter
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by Loyalist on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 03:02:53 AM AEST
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This poem is quite good indeed. My favorite line,
"There doesn't have to be emotion or care or listening.
Just restful thinking thoughts,"
It has great imagery and I could feel the peace you were/are in. Thank you for reading my opinion.
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Re: In The Dead Of Winter
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by sick_n_twisted on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 03:30:44 AM AEST
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| COOL POEM! i loved it! |
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Re: In The Dead Of Winter
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by bluebird on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 04:02:18 AM AEST
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i like the way you have kept the description going all the way through it.kept me wanting to read more.
~keep the faith~
Bluebird |
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Re: In The Dead Of Winter
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 06:09:41 AM AEST
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Wow that was such a great write, its so refreshing seeing your work. Keep them coming.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: In The Dead Of Winter
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 12:57:25 PM AEST
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Another way-past-awesome write to add to your list...This was so great Dane...this poem really kinda helped me calm down, you'll know why, and thanks for the advice...Really great job here Dane
Mason |
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Re: In The Dead Of Winter
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 07:01:44 PM AEST
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I once saw Bill Brasky kill two men
with a pork rhind.
This is an awesome poem,
gotta print it out.
You are getting better and better
with each write.
TO BILL BRASKY!!!!!!!!
--Ghosty |
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Re: In The Dead Of Winter
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 09:58:20 PM AEST
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*acts like Morpheus*
Find the dog |
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Re: In The Dead Of Winter
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 12:47:01 AM AEST
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Awesome write. Isn't it amazing to have these moments or seconds.
A masterpeice.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: In The Dead Of Winter
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by Ethereal_Engine on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 09:21:14 AM AEST
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| Very descriptive I like the scene of the the moon stars and wind. A great night to think things out, those moments are nice...yeah iv'e been away from this site for a long while.. |
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Re: In The Dead Of Winter
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 8th June 2014 @ 12:00:54 AM AEST
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this is beautiful, absolute peace in the moment, love
the barks echoing down the street...
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: In The Dead Of Winter
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 8th November 2014 @ 12:49:49 PM AEST
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Powerful write Mister...Determined ending that exposes your steadfast personality. Dripping in imagery...just. WOW!
~Scorp |
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