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I miss my friend
Contributed by
brokenwings
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Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 12:45:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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i long to love you, i need to be near you but in the end i won't love you,
and you wont love me, I'll be nothing more than a gentle memory,
one to bring a tear to your eye, yet still one, for that tear to dry,
we were perfect in friendship, even better lovers,
sorry it all had to end coz of under the covers,
I miss you each and every day, I only wish for you is that you still smile,
as much as it broke my heart to lose my dear friend,
deep down I knew I wasn't able to depend,
to depend on our tortured soul to complete me,
On this snowy cold night in your arms,
is where i wish i I could be,
but we said good bye in one final call,
I held back my tears, but they showed in my voice,
And in the end all I said was I always be your friend,
I wish and wish for you to come back,
just so I'd have someone to be open with
someone to hold me when I cried,
when I said I didn't love you...
i'm sorry I lied....
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2004-12-23 00:45:10]
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Re: I miss my friend
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by Jenn2004 on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 02:12:55 AM AEST
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| Im sorry for what youre going though, im going through the same thing myself. I was sitting here thinking about it, and then i saw your post. It hurts so bad, i think about him all the time. I wish more than anything i could get his friendship back. I just thought we could be more than friends. |
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Re: I miss my friend
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by savedbydeath on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 02:17:17 AM AEST
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wow,great write it was well and very well i mean written, i really liked this,i guess it happened to u to eh?i told someone i didnt love him and then when he was gone i realized that i actually did,ever heard of the phrase "never know what u got til its gone"yeah that happened to u and me and alot of other,u never forget ur first love,sometimes a miracle happens and ur first love becomes ur last and only love,i wish that happened to me,but it didnt so now i move on with the haunting memories,great write
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