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Live to be fallen stealer of souls
Contributed by
spirit_of_dark_tears
on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 12:40:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A Broken man alone to stand the ticking times of sand a lust for sorrow
A lust for death can not grasp my dieing breath the theft of the soul fallen into the dark whole can not find my lost soul I live to fall to live life is to fall to love is one thing but fall in love is another its to be vanished by the dark wolfs tear lust for sorrow lusts for death falling appalling peace of filth to rust In the blood of the scribe So let the wicked perish in the presence of God
The sins of the father atoned by the son live to be fallen foe of my spawn let all the wither let all the fall let all be fallin in the presents of god every thing suffocates in the dust ye be knighted by my breath all my foes comes a vengeful dreadful confession death come feel your dieing breath
Feel my steal you stiller of souls all of the who follow his foot steps are my foe all those stealer of souls welcome to my crimson stone
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Re: Live to be fallen stealer of souls
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by Adriean on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 02:07:28 AM AEST
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| You write, not only beautifully, but truthfully and abstract as well. You have major talent. Don't let it go to waste. Put it to your own use and you could be put don in history along with Robert Frost. |
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Re: Live to be fallen stealer of souls
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by Loyalist on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 02:49:42 AM AEST
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| If I may comment constructively. If I was to have writ this ode to darkness, I might have arranged the verses a little more neatly. Although, the choas may be your style and I can respect that as well. Still, the organization may bring in the reader and improve the impact. Anyhow, enough of that. I really liked this and will be looking up your profile to read more. Thank you for reading my opinion. |
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Re: Live to be fallen stealer of souls
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by blacksabbath026 on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 03:52:39 PM AEST
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| very nice the first time i read through i was amazed on your use of words very good |
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