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My wish
Contributed by
stonedraider23
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Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 12:23:40 AM in AEST
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I do wish
To have her in my future
To walk with her hand in hand
To spend countless hours in each others arms
To kiss under the brightest stars
To share our deepest desires
I do wish to have her in my future
I do love her with all my heart
She helped me care when I was careless
I never cared for anything until she spoke
My carefree days are gone
Blown away like mindless tumble weeds
Together taking pictures
Of where we went
Of where we lived
Of what we seen
Of each other under the lovely clouds
Together in the future hold each other
Fighting all those who said we'd never be
Kissing in the rain while walking hand in hand
Yes Sher I see Rodney in my future
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Re: My wish
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by cheech on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 12:32:10 AM AEST
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Good good i'm glad for yous both,i truly know that u too would make eachother happy and i dont even really know u in person,but hey its aight bc 1 day i will and u'll be exactly what rodneys looken for,right?good i'm glad u agree with me.even though u dont know all the things there is to know about her i have great knowledge that 1 day u will no way more then most people,and that would be quite the surprize considering many have tried and came out dry,theres alot to know but u'll find out 1 day,good write i really liked it
cheech
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Re: My wish
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by savedbydeath on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 01:46:13 AM AEST
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| holy sh*t!as i blush red blooded,r u serious?omg!i'm sorry i just cant believe i just read this and its about me,its about me right?cuz if its not that was mean,oh my god i just,no it cant be,is it?wow |
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Re: My wish
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 11:30:07 AM AEST
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| Wonderful poem and I hope everything werks out for the both of you together. You will write beautiful poems together..Mike |
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Re: My wish
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 01:49:42 AM AEST
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| This is very sweet. You have such a beautiful way of putting your feelings into words. :-) |
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