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I remain unheard
Contributed by
lonely_boy
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Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 12:19:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Nights spent alone, desperate for your touch
I dread these days because I miss you so much
To spend my life with you is all I wish
For only then will I stop cutting my wrists
So much pain held in when you’re gone
Letting it all out when I hear these sad songs
Scars on my body that show how much I care
A life of laughter, now overwhelmed with despair
Eyes shedding tears that dry into my skin
Remembering the good times that we shared then
Memories of you that are destroying my life
Taking the pain away by using this knife
My life was once clear, but is now darkened by a storm
Wanting you here so that you can keep me warm
I scream so loud, but I remain unheard
I speak to you, but you don’t even say a word
I fall to my knees as I scream out your name
Though the silence between us remains the same
I sit in my room with blood flowing from my arms
Because of our silence, I receive more scars
I cry myself to sleep when you are gone
It’s just a short time, but it seems just so long
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lonely_boy
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Re: I remain unheard
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by cheech on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 12:40:37 AM AEST
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i know how u feel,i once cut my wrist bc my ex did not ever wanna talk to me,he wrote a song and it was called the great silence,it made me cry and wanna die,it saddens me that u went through it,i hope 1 day u get over the silence and yell out loud how u feel,great poem i really liked it
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Re: I remain unheard
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 12:52:16 AM AEST
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| Wow....this is an awesome write. There's so much emotion in it and you can tell you put your whole heart into it. Great work. :-) |
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Re: I remain unheard
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 01:22:31 AM AEST
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| Excellent writing. I always love reading anything with emotion behind it. Keep up the good work. |
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Re: I remain unheard
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by savedbydeath on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 02:01:00 AM AEST
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great write.sad but relate-able,i know ur pain,hang in there
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Re: I remain unheard
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by DragonFly on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 02:22:15 AM AEST
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| This has got to be one of the best poems I've read on this site in a while. So much emotion behind it. Passion. Aggression. It has it all. It hit me straight to the heart, sent tingles down my spine. In short, it was beautiful. |
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Re: I remain unheard
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by biggredd on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 05:56:55 PM AEST
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Wow!!! I can tell that a lot of emotions and pain went into this poem... that's what makes this beautiful. I know your pain, and I know sometimes that things get so hard that you just don't feel like living anymore. But just know that there will be more hardships to come, but it'll all be worth it once you find something in life that makes you happy. Anyways... I look forward to reading more of your stuff. Great work!!!
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Re: I remain unheard
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by mellymell on
Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 10:52:05 AM AEST
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| this is a really good poem, i think almost everyone at one point felt like that over someone! |
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