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Jay
Contributed by
wickedlette420
on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 12:04:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I'm alone
i remember your words
i remember your lips
i remember our song
i remember your kiss
it's not fair that i want you back
'cause you'll never love me again like that
i hate your games
i hate your lies
i hate your blonde hair and baby blue eyes
i hate your sweetness and loving attitude
and i hate, though i can't admit it,
i'm still in love with you
i can steal your heart
i can take you away
and maybe this time i can make you stay
i look in the mirror with a sigh and a moan
i look in the mirror
a tear falls
i'm alone
Copyright ©
wickedlette420
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2004-12-23 00:04:17]
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Re: Jay
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 12:45:27 AM AEST
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| Though it's sad, it's a beautiful poem... I really liked the flow. |
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Re: Jay
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by Jace21 on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 10:38:13 AM AEST
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| Whoa great poem. I can relate to this with a girl I've likd for a long time, but still, I hold on even if I dont want to. Only God knows whats in store for us in teh future. Great work here. |
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Re: Jay
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by Unheard_Mute on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 04:21:12 PM AEST
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| aw how sad, I'm sorry 'lette, good write |
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Re: Jay
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by DoomedCuthulu on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 11:42:37 AM AEST
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A beatuiful poem with a great flow.
What is it with people called Jay? I worte a poem similar to this about one.
A good read. |
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