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Color of Pain
Contributed by
biggredd
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Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 10:53:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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It's so hard...being trapped....
Trapped inside your own hate.
Feelings & frustrations, that I finally snapped
from trying to escape my inevitable fate.
All the pain is part of me,
eating away at my could be's...
and all my attempts to free myself-
to be myself.
I can't even put into words,
what it's like to be in a world that doesn't want me.
And my hopes & dreams are like a bird-
trying to take flight into reality....
Now crimson is my favourite color...
Flowing out & pouring over-
out it comes like a flood- into the water
spills my own blood.
I start to fall into myself
Away from the sham.
I only have myself to blame,
for my feelings being raped...
This is my escape.
I'm fading away now.
Hello...can you still hear me?
I watch them all, silently pitying me
with their heads bowed.
But it doesn't matter...my pain is set free...
And for a short while i was sane...
and I figured out the color of pain.
Copyright ©
biggredd
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2004-12-22 22:53:30]
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Re: Color of Pain
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by Luka on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 11:00:57 PM AEST
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"And for a short while i was sane...
and I figured out the color of pain"
There couldent be a better ending.....i like this poem i really do it had a perfect and soldi rythem.....awesome job |
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Re: Color of Pain
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by spirit_of_dark_tears on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 11:29:55 PM AEST
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| man thats some tight stuff i totally feel you iv felt some of the same stuff u can read my DARKNESS&TEARS |
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Re: Color of Pain
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by sweetdreamsaremadeofthis on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 11:05:27 PM AEST
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| I must agree with Luka...the way you used your words here was so beautiful... |
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Re: Color of Pain
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 10:16:04 PM AEST
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| I really liked the last stanza. Great write. |
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